Another daily 100 word story. I forgot what I was watching with family at the time, but this came about the night before when in a scene on TV I saw a wedding dress staring out the window in a shop. There were no other wedding dresses, just her and for some reason that just felt incredibly sad for me.
I started putting the legs of it last night, but it just didn't feel right so I left it and woke up early (rare thing) to play around with it. I think I went through four rewrites (and another story) before I finally settled on this one.
Enjoy.
*picture is originally from http://snippetandink.com/romantic-vineyard-wedding/
10/30/2013 (Wednesday)- Pawned Memories
I was buying
unwanted memories at the pawn shop when I saw her.
A lonely yellowed
wedding dress staring out the window remembering better times… days spent with
a forever love, no broken glass promises.
A lace of spider-web silk, a layer of dust spoke volumes of her time: forgotten,
unwanted, unloved.
She’s waiting for
her owner to buy her back and tell her: It’s safe to come home, we’re better now…
…but she’s heard
too many false hopes and dreams.
I walked out
with a pawned off wedding ring, as she silently watched me leave from her
window seat.
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