I would have posted this earlier, but as soon as I was done typing it I realized I was too tired to give it a proper editing. Sorry everyone.
At first I was hesitant to do a buried alive story, just because I felt it required a lot of setup for it to work. I'm hoping I got that feeling, and that you all enjoy it.
A story dedicated to readers who enjoy the creepy dark.
Enjoy!
Enjoy!
10/02/2013 (Wednesday)- A Wake
You said
good-bye to me.
Lining up with
them to see my painted face through the coffin’s little window. I see your tears fall, your lips quivering, and
your face painted by relief that it isn’t you.
I scream. I’m alive! Let me out!... like
the others you didn’t hear me.
You said
good-bye to me.
Clods of dirt
hit the coffin, its echoes disturbing the dead silence. I could hear a wailing and gnashing of teeth,
but realize it’s just me. My screams
falling on deaf ears.
You said
good-bye, but…
I’m alive!
I’m awake!
... I’ll see you soon.
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